Assignment 3

I wrote my rough draft essay the way I did because I write whatever pops in my head. I think this is why some of my essays don’t have a good flow. It can sometimes be hard to connect things while I am writing. I usually get a whole bunch of thoughts in my head and I write them down. I usually don’t consider what affect it will have on the paper I am writing. I think I do this because I knew that it was only a rough draft. I chose not to correct everything and make the essay flow better because I know that I will have another chance to write it and approve it because it is just a rough draft.
Another thing that affects my writing is the fact that I know other people will be reading it. I hate when other people have to read my writing. I think that is why I didn’t put a lot of my opinion in my paper. I didn’t do it on purpose. It is just hard for me to write what I think or feel; just so 20 people that I don’t know will read them. This bothers me because I usually don’t express my feelings and now everyone is going to be reading what I think. So peer editing online is pretty much the same for me, I don’t like it but I know that in the long run it helps my writing. But I didn’t like that I was able to read other peoples blogs.
The notes and class discussions helped me write my essays. One thing that I liked about blogging is that I was able to read what everyone else wrote. This helped me expand on my ideas and made is a little easier to write my essay.
One of the main focuses of my essay was human factor. I think that human factor is something that should be considered while technology is being made because all people are different and it should just be assumed that everyone is the same and they will be able to just use the new device with no problems. Another thing I focused on was how people will never be content with what they have. There will always be something bigger and better.